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SUITABLE FOR VARIOUS OCCASIONS: They can be used for everyday wear, dating, working, walking, casual, dress, shopping, travel, long standing, afternoon tea... These are sure to make anyone go 'awww' whenever your are present
DESIGN DETAILS: Design features include an adjustable lace-up closure, water resistant and leather upper offers durability, retro british brogue design
COMFORTABLE LINING: Choose breathable and soft leather linings that add a touch of fashion to these adorable oxfords, and a lightweight, flexible outsole
FRIENDLY REMINDER: Size chart has been renewed(update:2019.7.22), Please order normal size, Thank you in advance
ALL DAY COMFORT: Comfortable platform with non-skid, much lighter than you imagine, show the beauty of female,manmade sole, antiskid and abrasion resistant